A Killing Poem by Soumita Sarkar

A Killing

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It is paining me
It is pulling me
And also reminding me

An invisible rope
Rooted in a pair of eyes
Indeed secret there lies

It's paining
It's reeling
On and on....
Again in the same spiral

A question
Hangs between us
We are fallen words in air

It's crushing
It's killing
Flowing like
Some slow poison

Never felt this heat
No such scars deep

It's falling me
It's blinding me
It's failing me
My courage is breaking down
It is squeezing my left ego

It's boiling inside
It's pinning me deep

It's a counting backward
It's a silent suicide

Wednesday, February 26, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: pain
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Souren Mondal 12 November 2015

'An invisible rope Rooted in a pair of eyes Indeed secret there lies' Interesting lines.... Can I ask you something? ? Is this about the 'male gaze'? ? I have a strange hunch that it is about it... Either ways, once again, it's pleasantly surprising to find someone (from India in particular) writing poems that are very much against the androcentric canon... Thank you Soumita.. Keep penning the poems.. Keep deconstructing the 'status quo' here.. Love your poems...

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Soumita Sarkar 28 February 2022

Yes Souren ji..its about male gaze......a trap a woman creates sometimes knowingly or unknowingly

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Suman Kumar Das 26 February 2014

your ink made me empathize the pain of killing.............................simple yet superb...............liked it

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Soumita Sarkar 28 February 2022

Thank You Sir. I am obliged.

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