A Kiss Poem by Akhtar Jawad

A Kiss

Rating: 5.0


I close my eyes
I close my ears
let your lips come in contact of my lips
I want to know the miracle
how eyes and ears are grown in the lips.
It's sweet what I saw in you
it's sweeter what I listened to from you
I am still in search what's the sweetest
It's duration of the kiss that was too short.
Well, not bad in the courtship.

Kiss me again and forget everything
as long as that when our lips are separated
we see wrinkles on our faces
and our hairs are white.
We have lost half of our teeth
still a lot we have that will never be lost.
We are not on the wheel chairs
we are still on our bed.
We listen to a few fairies, mermaids and unicorns
wishing happy golden jubilee of our kiss
a kiss in that our whole life was passed.
What a life it was that lasted in a kiss!

Sunday, November 26, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: lifespan
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kumarmani Mahakul 26 November 2017

Kissing once again and forgetting both sequences are amazing but still this act carries emotion and memory. We are wishing you very happy golden jubilee of life. Closing eyes you open and you feel miracle around you. God is merciful. May he bring unlimited happiness for you for fortunate living. Excellent! ..10

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Valsa George 01 December 2017

True Love never weakens with time! A poem celebrating the immortality of love! Sensuous and beautiful write! A 10

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Indira Renganathan 28 November 2017

A symbol of a long lived lovely life is this poem...deep in love and high in romance...God bless you dear friend

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Khalida Bano Ali 26 November 2017

What a poem! It's amazingly wonderful..................................................

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Dr Dillip K Swain 26 November 2017

Kiss me again and forgot everything... the poetic expression is adorable A great Romantic poem

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Rajnish Manga 26 November 2017

This is real a masterstroke. Looks like a fairly long and scintillating journey is here for a quick recap. Congratulations & Best Wishes, Akhtar Jawad Sahab. I want to know the miracle how eyes and ears are grown in the lips.

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