A Last Gasp Poem by Billy Loving

A Last Gasp



Into the ocean I wade
Final decision made
Steadily growing deeper
Soon to be my final keeper
Taking a deep breath of air
Going onward without a care
Submersed within it's cool embrace
Picking my resting place
Dropping my anchors to the floor
My last trip to shore
Awaiting life to subside
Here I'll reside
My troubles, I'll never miss
As I embrace the ocean's fatal kiss

Sunday, January 7, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: death
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Rose Marie Juan-austin 07 January 2018

A beautifully crafted write. Great rhyme with each line well executed.10

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Bri Edwards 07 January 2018

it's cool embrace ...........its :) nice rhyming. i especially enjoyed the last 2 lines: My troubles, I'll never miss As I embrace the ocean's fatal kiss.................. bri ;)

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