Poem 1143 Poem by Billy Loving

Poem 1143

Rating: 5.0


Body racked with pain,
Blank eyes staring into space
succumbing to death

Saturday, December 15, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: death
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Bernard F. Asuncion 16 December 2018

Billy, a well penned haiku....10++++

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Sylvia Frances Chan 15 December 2018

(2) No one has helped me, I sent myself the cartoons to that Youth Section to be valued and to be published or not...... It was.published! I was in 7th heaven! Yes, for an 11 year old girl.. Now I am at the least already 5 x 11 years old...........LOL. Thank you that I may write these words here, Billy. I am still proud of that. Dashing haiku of you. A 10 Full Vote. TFS.

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Sylvia Frances Chan 15 December 2018

My cartoon Yasmin has the year 1143 as the year that the story in my cartoon starts. I was then just 11-12 years old, but my ability for drawing is a gift. I still have the original Newspapers where the cartoons are published (in the Youth Section of an ordinary newspaper for adults.) . .............................................Please see (2)

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