Thursday, March 23, 2017

A Lazy Goan Afternoon By The Beach Comments

Rating: 5.0

On the beach, a bunch of boys
With a football, they toy!
Kicking it high in the air,
And following it, run like a hare!
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Goutam Dutta
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Jazib Kamalvi 29 November 2017

A sublime start with a nice poem, Goutam. You may like to read my poem, Love And Lust. Thank you.

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Goutam Dutta 29 November 2017

Thanks so much for having appreciated the poem. makes me happy to note that you liked the poem. Will certainly read your poem and revert back with comments. Regards.

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Kim Barney 23 March 2017

A fine effort for your first poem on this website. Welcome to Poem Hunter!

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Goutam Dutta 23 March 2017

Thank you for welcoming me and appreciating my poem. Regards

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Kumarmani Mahakul 23 March 2017

A beautiful poem having thrilling expression. Enjoyed. Thanks for sharing.

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Goutam Dutta 23 March 2017

Thanks so much for your comment. feels good to note that you liked it. had written this during one of my trips to Goa, with me sitting on the beach and watching the boys from the hotel take time out play football on the beach. Regards

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