A Little Life? Poem by Andy Brookes

A Little Life?



Writing outside sequential linear time'sunimportant
tales open,meanderinglifeordinates messy stutterings, heart judders,
soul searching.

Hertory much like others filled with little deeds,mundane acts,
how to judge a small life of little action but much kindness

though her wisdom is now lost to me andI mourn it's passing.
I came late into her story, a bit part, she in turn leftmine early,
taking her final bow with style and grace, as the curtain fell.

How to take the measure her life that I find the hardest to unravel.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Bri Edwards 02 November 2018

Hertory? Her story? could PH have done ALL THAT! ? THE BAS T ARDS! ! ! How to take the measure her life that I find the hardest to unravel. I think measure of her life and a comma after life. favorite lines: ........filled with little deeds, mundane acts, how to judge a small life of little action but much kindness though her wisdom is now lost to me andI mourn it's passing. of course, its, not it's. hee-hee. bri :)

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