David Harris

Gold Star - 4,611 Points (18 June 1945 / Bradfield, England)

A Little Squirrel (Fun Poem)

Poem by David Harris

All summer long he collected his nuts
Burying them here and there
When it came to dig them up
He couldn’t remember where
He hid his treasure store

The moral of this tale
Be sure, there is one indeed
If you want to bury your treasures
And you ain’t that smart
Draw a little map, that will help for a start

Comments about A Little Squirrel (Fun Poem) by David Harris

  • Kim BarneyKim Barney (4/3/2017 4:07:00 PM)

    A good poem with a good moral.
    More than just fun. Very good advice.(Report)Reply

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  • Jayatissa K. LiyanageJayatissa K. Liyanage (1/13/2017 6:49:00 AM)

    More than fun, this teaches us a gem of a life-lesson. Please read my poem Good, Bad and who knows........ for fun.Thank you for sharing.(Report)Reply

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  • Marmaduke WilliamsMarmaduke Williams (6/4/2013 10:04:00 PM)

    Such an emotional poem. I love the way you use the squirrel as a metaphor for Hitler. Wonderful. It was like I was actually there. It's also nice how you use the treasure as a metaphor for Jews.(Report)Reply

    Celia Bemmet(5/23/2017 9:44:00 AM)

    That is an interesting response that you have. How did you come to that conclusion?

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  • Rasasilent Rasasilent (5/12/2011 2:48:00 AM)

    when i cry no one there when no money in my pocket when i have the legal money in my pocket many hand toward me are they crazy of money or me i dont get in to trouble free from afried rather than have cute respect of life respect make them to come up in life not the very quick higher(Report)Reply

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  • Alison Cassidy (12/19/2007 10:26:00 PM)

    I had to check out this one because I've been making squirrel's costumes all week in preparation for my children's dance performance. They are such dear little critters, though quite feisty I'm told (the one's in my show certainly are!) . One of the dad's was telling me how they fed squirrels recently during a visit to the UK. Apparently the squirrels would take a nut deftly from the hand, run a few steps, stop, dig a little hole in the ground, pat down the earth firmly over it and scamper back for more. He was enchanted with them, as I am with this poem! love, Allie xxxx(Report)Reply

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  • Caroline Morton (5/13/2007 6:43:00 AM)

    What a fun little poem. I agree with shelia, do a childens short poem book and get someone to do the drawings(Report)Reply

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  • ... Sheila (5/3/2007 10:23:00 AM)

    I love your 'fun' poems especially so. You have a fine sense of humor. Have you ever thought of writing some kids books. They'd totally dig this stuff!(Report)Reply

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  • Sylvia Spencer (4/16/2007 5:53:00 AM)

    Hi David such sense of humor Brilliant write Cheers Sylvie(Report)Reply

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  • Theodora Onken (4/11/2007 4:48:00 AM)

    Oh David, I too, have a little ground squirrel. he lives in my front yard. he has a front door and a back door...and he forages the pecans from neighbors tree's but sometimes, only when i am feeling that he has had a bad day, i help him out with some shelled walnuts, and he loves them. Loved your poem. What a writer you are my friend, and i adored this poem and it is worth a ten in my book!
    Warm regards, Theo(Report)Reply

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  • Francesca Johnson (4/9/2007 9:37:00 AM)

    I know a 'little squirrel' who needs a map on where he left his keys and mobile phone! Enjoyed this, David.......now where did I leave my pen? ....

    Love, Fran xx(Report)Reply

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  • Jim Foulk (4/7/2007 8:22:00 PM)

    david this was really a very cute little poem, very touching.(Report)Reply

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  • Melvina GermainMelvina Germain (4/7/2007 8:18:00 AM)

    Oh a fun poem, I love fun, it gives a really great feeling. This poem flows beautifully, great rhyme and a lot of fun to read. I love it David, thankyou my friend. ---Melvina---(Report)Reply

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  • Emily =) (4/7/2007 1:23:00 AM)

    10/10 even though it was a fun poem, you worded it very well it wasn't just nonsense, very good i loved it! Emily -x-(Report)Reply

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  • Duncan Wyllie (4/6/2007 11:01:00 AM)

    I enjoyed the flow, and yes! , I understand the concept of having a bad memory, but one must look at the bright side...YOU GET TO HIDE YOUR OWN EASTER EGGS
    Take care
    Love Duncan X(Report)Reply

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  • Andrew mark Wilkinson (4/5/2007 2:14:00 PM)

    Oh nuts, always get you in trouble my friend... They drive you out of your tree... David..10 if i can be serious for once in my life... thanks for the complement i think...(Report)Reply

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  • JoAnn McGrathJoAnn McGrath (4/5/2007 1:52:00 PM)

    Or could it be the blind one everyone talks about: O)
    Seriously though you put Aesop to shame
    Your's are way more funny(Report)Reply

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Poem Submitted: Thursday, April 5, 2007

Poem Edited: Friday, February 11, 2011

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