Chasing Rainbows Poem by David Harris

Oh, this is a pessimistic one, David! Sounds like the writer just wants to curl up and die! I'm sure this isn't happening to you..... but it's cleverly written. Love, Fran xx

I just llve this, David: 'To the no where end Where I’ll be forgotten' Especially your 'no where end' Good feeling here. Keep up the good work. alicia

Very fine craftwork, David...I HAVE FOUND, IN MY OWN PRIVATE WORLD, THAT WHETHER OR NOT TERES ALWAYS ANEW LOVE TO REPLACE AN OLD LOVE, CAN BE QUELLED IF YOU HAVE YOUR DREAMS & IMAGES & IF YOU HAVE BEEN GIFTED TO BE ONE OF THSE FEW WHO CAN WRITE ABOUT IT &RELEASE THAT VOID TIL LOVE COMES ONCE AGAIN.YOU HAVE THAT GIFT, MY NFRIEND...EMBELLISH IN IT! F. j. R.

Just because, on balance we fancy the idea of being on the hamster wheel a little more than we do the reality of being off it, is my explanation! Why are you writing my story by the way? ? I feel at home in this one. I'd rather I didn't, but that's the way it is. Some universal truths captured here I suspect David. A very fine poem sir. jim

An intensely appealing piece - for its honesty, its whimsy and its pleasing structure. I'm glad the spark of passion continues to burn in your soul and I love your particular brand of gentle humour too. Lovely poem. Warmly, Allie xxxx

i am looking for a poem about how rainbows make people feel

Great poem man! By the way please read my poems and comment abou them as i don't have much experience

Sad piece here.....but I know you'll never be forgotten: O)

This is such a great poem filled with profound thoughts! I mean how true is it that if we keep doing the same thing we can not expect to get something different...yet we continue on the same path over and over even when we know we are not happy where it leads! ? Great title and imagery..a very well writen piece by a very intelligent and talented poet. Have a Great day and thanx 4 sharing. =Shelley=

A warm message sent through poetry. Thanks for sharing David. I gave you a ten. I have rainbow poems too. Im a rainbowholic! Will be back.Lisa