Musfiq us shaleheen

Gold Star - 4,520 Points (31st, December,1970 / Khulna, Bangladesh)

A Lonely Song - Poem by Musfiq us shaleheen

None but all went on by boats of time
Chaos creates on bean by times uncertainty
As childish mind random impeach began-

Dream boomed with beloved boon
A simple math always out of law
It's never retorted reality-

Thee (friends) hopping with honey hunt
Joy is joyless except cash and gun, replied thee
Money for nothing, love for everything
A foolish fury fondness-

My son and better half engaged with fantasy
Ice-cream, shopping, horror film
Mother stood on a far away
A childish passion blurs
As caged bird sings with his anger-

At dark night I see large sad sky
Stars apart from love and hope-
Lonely moon hides behind cloud
An angle played an ambiguous flute
A passionate roar of heart called-
A lonely song!
An abstract lonely song! !

- Shaleheen,5th January,2013

Topic(s) of this poem: lonely

Poet's Notes about The Poem

A Lonely Song..

Comments about A Lonely Song by Musfiq us shaleheen

  • Shashikant Nishant Sharma (3/8/2013 2:01:00 AM)

    Nice poem, well expressed wonderful concept...Good job... (Report) Reply

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  • Kelvin Owusu (1/14/2013 2:16:00 AM)

    Beautifully written poem, great job (Report) Reply

  • Vishal Sharma (1/10/2013 3:53:00 AM)

    a very deep and emo...poem..nice... (Report) Reply

  • Hazel Durham (1/9/2013 5:43:00 AM)

    A very deep and complex poem full of great imagery! ! (Report) Reply

  • Vivek Tiwari (1/8/2013 8:22:00 PM)

    Well expressed the feelings of lonelyness but a line money for nothing and love for everything makes the poem an optimistic one. (Report) Reply

  • Sallam Yassin (1/8/2013 12:43:00 PM)

    deep cry of pure heart
    althou it makes me sad
    but u done what the poet
    must done
    u made my heart beat/well done
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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, January 8, 2013

Poem Edited: Friday, June 13, 2014

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