Musfiq us shaleheen

Gold Star - 5,142 Points (31st, December,1970 / Khulna, Bangladesh)

The Lost Spring - Poem by Musfiq us shaleheen

This day you left me
And spring lost its flower forever
At early spring, young called never
Again in a low silent day,
I heard the crisping of a lost grasshopper

In a black and white glow dream
Far away from the silky moon sprung
There birds feathers were oping with high delicate
Though Pale petals were losing their pixel with pleasant
But the high divine melody colored the deep purple

Then another high spring fallen to light purple
Yellow flowers bloom on her pale face again
At Night mild murmur cools the heart of the passionate
And the Sunflower rises on the first shines of sun
Melts with a dream after a long winter washed

Musfiq us shaleheen,12th February,2014

Topic(s) of this poem: spring

Poet's Notes about The Poem

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Comments about The Lost Spring by Musfiq us shaleheen

  • (1/31/2016 5:39:00 PM)

    eu the spring you'll lost the beginning. Great metaphor. (Report) Reply

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  • Bharati Nayak (9/19/2015 11:33:00 AM)

    The poem is really mesmerising! ! (Report) Reply

  • Daniel Brick (7/25/2014 5:20:00 AM)

    This poem is a lovely evocation of the spring season, both for its beauty and for its memories. You use of colors is remarkable - I especially like the purple - it makes spring not only a riot of growing things but also an explosion of colors
    after the dullness of winter. You wrote of your appreciation of my spring poem and now I can express my appreciation of yours. We may live thousands of miles apart but poetry and spring create a unity in our two minds.
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  • Elias Uddin (2/20/2014 10:14:00 AM)

    Melts with a dream after a long winter washed

    nice idea.
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  • Md Asadullah (2/16/2014 9:30:00 AM)

    Thanks for sharing your beautiful poem, I enjoyed reading it :) (Report) Reply

  • Hazel Durham (2/16/2014 5:42:00 AM)

    I'm lost for words, I love this work of supreme beauty, so delicate with lines that leave a trail of the comfort of hope!
    Thank you so much for sharing.
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  • Patricia Grantham (2/15/2014 9:02:00 AM)

    A beautiful poem written just in time for Valentines Day. Your expressions of
    love is great in this write. Love compared to flowers that will soon again bloom
    in freshness and renewed.Very sweet poem.
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  • Valsa George (2/14/2014 11:22:00 PM)

    This day you left me
    And spring lost its flower forever

    The poem opens on a note of sadness.... but it ends with a touch of hope and 'flowers once again blooming on her pale face'! ! Enjoyed reading it! !
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  • Poetheart Morgan (2/14/2014 1:10:00 PM)

    HOPE! ! ! HOPE! ! ! ! Finally the winter went away....gone....Now is time of a new bloom Poet. (Report) Reply

  • Sallam Yassin (2/14/2014 8:55:00 AM)

    sweet and elegant piece of art
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  • Sayeed Abubakar (2/14/2014 8:45:00 AM)

    Nice imagery. You have a true poetic genius. (Report) Reply

  • (2/14/2014 3:51:00 AM)

    Nice and well written poem. (Report) Reply

  • Tirupathi Chandrupatla (2/14/2014 3:41:00 AM)

    Then another high spring fallen to light purple
    Here we await spring. You wrote a beautiful one for the lost spring. Thank you.
    (Report) Reply

  • Vishal Sharma (2/14/2014 2:28:00 AM)

    very heart touching and great poem to read (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, February 11, 2014

Poem Edited: Saturday, July 12, 2014

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