A Lonely Star Poem by Wassila Nader

Nice and simple poem....love it. :)

tooooooooooooooooooooooooo good.short n swt

Poor lonely star, Let the moon be your friend, And don't care about the end. Cause the moon is also lonely friend... No one even thought about this imagination to say that the moon is lonely.. we always put the moon as witness on our love or to light or nights very good imagination take 20 not just 10

poems with comments galore usually don't get mine, but since you asked...This is, I guess you could say, one of those poems that makes quite the impression because of it's short yet touching work of imagination. I don't adore it, but I like it.

Wassila, Last four lines are beautiful. God Bless and Happy New Year.

Lovely poem! It's sure in the sky, the star still has the moon. It's not lonely. ^^

Poor lonely star and poor lonely poet.Your loneliness shall not continue for the sum must rise and the pain go away.

simple innocence in your poem attracts me and the desire to have a friend. loneliness is a very good theme.. thank u for sharing

Nice poem, a beautiful one! ! ! Even the whole poem was written literally, we can also see a moral true behind the same.A true and real friendship is everything that we need and try to achieve nowdays in a word corrupted by the ambition, greed.There are a lot of lonely stars outside there looking for someone to be with.Congratulations! ! ! ! Keep writting...10

Very nice poem, We stay lonely and die lonely. You will be a famous poet.