A lonely tear falls down
A smile turns to frown
Trickles down the cheek
Does not make you weak
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its very nice as jona said it did not end with a sad ending and that is wat nice about it
this poem was very good. i did exsecialy like it because it is not ended on a depressing note. it is always nce to have happy ening once ina while. ;)
Oh i liked this poem ^.^ great job it was wonderfully done!
I loved this peom, I can relate to it,10 years ago, my heart broke and this was my life for 1 month. Beautiful.