Thursday, September 21, 2006

A Lonely Tear Comments

Rating: 5.0

A lonely tear falls down
A smile turns to frown
Trickles down the cheek
Does not make you weak
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Megan Dugan
COMMENTS
Shorya 12 December 2017

I loved this peom, I can relate to it,10 years ago, my heart broke and this was my life for 1 month. Beautiful.

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Jasmeen Kaur 04 December 2017

loved the poem, it touched my heart

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Mohammad Mahmoudi 22 December 2008

its very nice as jona said it did not end with a sad ending and that is wat nice about it

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Justin Holmes 30 August 2008

Its touching. i really like it,

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Jona`e Levett 20 October 2007

this poem was very good. i did exsecialy like it because it is not ended on a depressing note. it is always nce to have happy ening once ina while. ;)

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Ana Monnar 27 July 2007

Your poem is very sentimental and it touched my heart. : -)

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Ashleigh Skandarsky 22 June 2007

Oh i liked this poem ^.^ great job it was wonderfully done!

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Aliyah Al-Sharji 07 December 2006

nice poem, i really could feel this poem well done

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