Lying alone on this cold winter's eve
My thoughts of you seem never to cease.
O, how I long for the feel of your skin!
What I wouldn't give to hear your voice again!
The sound of my name as it passes those lips...
Those lips sealing mine with a passionate kiss...
This and much more to you I would give.
But I know it won't happen, as long as I live...
Why must I long for a love unobtainable?
Why must these feelings be so unassailable?
You know of my feelings, and still you care not.
It seems so unfair to be cast such a lot.
You torment me so; my love just grows stronger...
I wonder if I can take this for much longer...
a very beautiful, well writen poem that really does come from the heart.
Written from your heart Elizabeth, men to, have a one sided love!
All the ruminations of a one-sided love have been well-expressed. The pain is tangible.
malarkey and sentimental dross. nothing interesting with language going on here...
An intensely and poetically expressed scenario that too many of us are too well acquainted with. That makes it no less painful. And a cure isn't guaranteed. Young love cuts deep. Excellent writing.
I am beginning to think we all suffer the same problems. You are a romantic, but love is cruel, and fickle, my heart's been broken too many times, there's nothing left of it to yearn. I like your poem!
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
wow is the only word i can say to describe what i thought of this poem i enjoyed reading it *Felicia*