Sayeed Abubakar
Jessore / Bangladesh
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A Love Poem

Rating: 2.9
You and me
Me and you
Flower-bee
Grass and dew.
Monday, June 20, 2011
Topic(s) of this poem: love,love and life
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English poem
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COMMENTS
Sayeed Abubakar 21 August 2020
Thank you, dear Sylvia. Nice comment. Grateful to you.
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Sylvia Frances Chan 25 July 2020
Adorable Love Poem, concise but crystal clear and cutest composed.
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A B Faniki 24 September 2019
Beautifuly writen. The image u ink with few words is vivid and elegant. Thanks for sharing
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Me Poet Yeps Poet 27 May 2018
so simple brief and so beautiful grass me bee dew and u
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Sayeed Abubakar 15 August 2018
Nice comment. Thank you very much. Stay happy.
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Britte Ninad 15 May 2018
wow excellent combination grass with dew, flower with bee and you with me....... yeah really GOD created us paired.
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Sayeed Abubakar 22 May 2018
Nice comment and good evaluation. Thanks.
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M Asim Nehal 03 September 2016
Inseparable and made for each other....Simple yet deep in meaning. Short and awesome love poem.
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Sayeed Abubakar 04 September 2016
Thanks a lot. I feel inspired.
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Daniel Brick 07 July 2016
This is an extremely compressed poem but I find two themes concerning L-O-V-E expressed brilliantly; FIRST, love means two into one, a union of two and the imagery expresses this with two natural relationships, THAT IS, the bee and the flower & grass and dew. These natural relationships are inevitable and thus the imagery imparts that inevitability to love. SECOND, The lovers are not named except by generic pronouns, which emphasizes the universality of love.
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Sayeed Abubakar 07 July 2016
Dear Daniel Brick, it is the best comment I have ever had on my poem. Your comment is very brilliant, explanation, very minute; and expression, very poetic. I just love it.
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Mehnoor Rizvi 04 April 2016
Briefly written but says all between two lovers..
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Sayeed Abubakar 15 June 2016
Brilliant comment.
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Sayeed Abubakar 02 March 2016
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Sayeed Abubakar 15 June 2016
Masuma translated it into Bengali
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Galina Italyanskaya 21 January 2016
So simple and so profound! Just brilliant!
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Sayeed Abubakar 21 January 2016
Your comment so simple but great too.
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