A Love Poem

Thank you, dear Sylvia. Nice comment. Grateful to you.

Adorable Love Poem, concise but crystal clear and cutest composed.

Beautifuly writen. The image u ink with few words is vivid and elegant. Thanks for sharing

so simple brief and so beautiful grass me bee dew and u

wow excellent combination grass with dew, flower with bee and you with me....... yeah really GOD created us paired.

Inseparable and made for each other....Simple yet deep in meaning. Short and awesome love poem.

This is an extremely compressed poem but I find two themes concerning L-O-V-E expressed brilliantly; FIRST, love means two into one, a union of two and the imagery expresses this with two natural relationships, THAT IS, the bee and the flower & grass and dew. These natural relationships are inevitable and thus the imagery imparts that inevitability to love. SECOND, The lovers are not named except by generic pronouns, which emphasizes the universality of love.

Briefly written but says all between two lovers..

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So simple and so profound! Just brilliant!