A Love Poem - Poem by Sayeed Abubakar

Beautifuly writen. The image u ink with few words is vivid and elegant. Thanks for sharing (Report)Reply

so simple brief and so beautiful
grass me bee dew and u (Report)Reply

Sayeed Abubakar(8/15/2018 7:23:00 AM)

Nice comment. Thank you very much. Stay happy.

wow excellent combination

grass with dew, flower with bee and you with me.......

yeah really GOD created us paired. (Report)Reply

Sayeed Abubakar(5/22/2018 8:31:00 PM)

Nice comment and good evaluation. Thanks.

Inseparable and made for each other....Simple yet deep in meaning. Short and awesome love poem. (Report)Reply

Sayeed Abubakar(9/4/2016 9:56:00 AM)

Thanks a lot. I feel inspired.

This is an extremely compressed poem but I find two themes concerning L-O-V-E expressed brilliantly; FIRST, love means two into one, a union of two and the imagery expresses this with two natural relationships, THAT IS, the bee and the flower & grass and dew. These natural relationships are inevitable and thus the imagery imparts that inevitability to love. SECOND, The lovers are not named except by generic pronouns, which emphasizes the universality of love. (Report)Reply

Sayeed Abubakar(7/7/2016 7:42:00 PM)

Dear Daniel Brick, it is the best comment I have ever had on my poem. Your comment is very brilliant, explanation, very minute; and expression, very poetic. I just love it.

Briefly written but says all between two lovers.. (Report)Reply

Sayeed Abubakar(6/15/2016 4:52:00 PM)

Brilliant comment.

একটি প্রেমের কবিতা:
তুমি আর আমি
আমি আর তুমি
যেন পুষ্প-ভ্রমর
তৃণ আর শিশির ।
বঙ্গানুবাদ করেছেন- মাসুমা আখতার রুমা (Report)Reply

Sayeed Abubakar(6/15/2016 4:53:00 PM)

Masuma translated it into Bengali

So simple and so profound!
Just brilliant! (Report)Reply

Sayeed Abubakar(1/21/2016 6:57:00 PM)

Your comment so simple but great too.

Lovely write. Sums up the life. (Report)Reply

Sayeed Abubakar(1/19/2016 8:54:00 AM)

Thanks, Savita Tyagi. I like your comment very much.

Nice poem that twined between two lovers, Thank for sharing. (Report)Reply

Sayeed Abubakar(1/19/2016 8:52:00 AM)

Lovely comment. You comment is always nice.

Very interesting poem of love. i were heared this poem from your voice. i am your student of sirajganj gov.t college. (Report)Reply

Sayeed Abubakar(6/15/2016 4:55:00 PM)

Good. Your comment is nice

Powerful poem on love and it is beautiful (Report)Reply

Sayeed Abubakar(7/8/2014 9:55:00 AM)

Thanks, dear poet.

Ir's called spontaneous overflow of powerful feeling. (Report)Reply

Sayeed Abubakar(6/15/2016 4:57:00 PM)

Yes, It is that

Powerful and meaningful words captured nicely in 4 verses, nice poem. (Report)Reply

Sayeed Abubakar(6/15/2016 4:58:00 PM)

Excellent. A nice comment

The passion that is love embracing nature with the truth that shines from your eyes!
Beautiful write! (Report)Reply

Sayeed Abubakar(6/15/2016 4:59:00 PM)

Many many thanks, dear Hazel for your nice comment

I can rhyme it the whole day. Excellent. a 10. (Report)Reply

Sayeed Abubakar(6/15/2016 4:59:00 PM)

Oh really? You are so great!

Simple and awesome with beautiful relation. (Report)Reply

Sayeed Abubakar(6/15/2016 5:00:00 PM)

Thank you very much. I feel inspired

It is a nice piece of poem. I listen to this poem today. This poet is also one of my favorite poet and favorite teacher. So I like him most. (Report)Reply

Sayeed Abubakar(6/15/2016 5:33:00 PM)

ha ha. Thanks. It's just nice

you and Me; me and you
how sweetly put and shortly said.....
regards
Malinikadir (Report)Reply

Sayeed Abubakar(6/15/2016 4:51:00 PM)

Nice comment. Short but beautiful