Sayeed Abubakar

Gold Star - 16,408 Points (21 September 1972 / Jessore / Bangladesh)

poet Sayeed Abubakar
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A Love Poem - Poem by Sayeed Abubakar

You and me
me and you
flower-bee
grass and dew.


Comments about A Love Poem by Sayeed Abubakar

  • The Poet Poet (5/27/2018 3:23:00 PM)


    so simple brief and so beautiful
    grass me bee dew and u     (Report) Reply

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  • Britte Ninad (5/15/2018 6:21:00 AM)


    wow excellent combination

    grass with dew, flower with bee and you with me.......

    yeah really GOD created us paired.     (Report) Reply

    (5/22/2018 8:31:00 PM)

    Nice comment and good evaluation. Thanks.

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  • Mohammed Asim Nehal (9/3/2016 2:20:00 PM)


    Inseparable and made for each other....Simple yet deep in meaning. Short and awesome love poem. (Report) Reply

    Sayeed Abubakar (9/4/2016 9:56:00 AM)

    Thanks a lot. I feel inspired.

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  • Daniel Brick (7/7/2016 1:51:00 PM)


    This is an extremely compressed poem but I find two themes concerning L-O-V-E expressed brilliantly; FIRST, love means two into one, a union of two and the imagery expresses this with two natural relationships, THAT IS, the bee and the flower & grass and dew. These natural relationships are inevitable and thus the imagery imparts that inevitability to love. SECOND, The lovers are not named except by generic pronouns, which emphasizes the universality of love. (Report) Reply

    Sayeed Abubakar (7/7/2016 7:42:00 PM)

    Dear Daniel Brick, it is the best comment I have ever had on my poem. Your comment is very brilliant, explanation, very minute; and expression, very poetic. I just love it.

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  • (4/4/2016 1:52:00 AM)


    Briefly written but says all between two lovers.. (Report) Reply

    Sayeed Abubakar (6/15/2016 4:52:00 PM)

    Brilliant comment.

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  • Sayeed Abubakar (3/2/2016 7:13:00 AM)


    একটি প্রেমের কবিতা:
    তুমি আর আমি
    আমি আর তুমি
    যেন পুষ্প-ভ্রমর
    তৃণ আর শিশির ।
    বঙ্গানুবাদ করেছেন- মাসুমা আখতার রুমা     (Report) Reply

    Sayeed Abubakar (6/15/2016 4:53:00 PM)

    Masuma translated it into Bengali

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  • Galina Italyanskaya (1/21/2016 12:29:00 PM)


    So simple and so profound!
    Just brilliant!     (Report) Reply

    Sayeed Abubakar (1/21/2016 6:57:00 PM)

    Your comment so simple but great too.

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  • Savita Tyagi (1/19/2016 8:19:00 AM)


    Lovely write. Sums up the life. (Report) Reply

    Sayeed Abubakar (1/19/2016 8:54:00 AM)

    Thanks, Savita Tyagi. I like your comment very much.

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  • Abderrahmane Dakir (1/15/2016 9:42:00 AM)


    Nice poem that twined between two lovers, Thank for sharing. (Report) Reply

    Sayeed Abubakar (1/19/2016 8:52:00 AM)

    Lovely comment. You comment is always nice.

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  • md monir (4/6/2015 1:22:00 AM)


    Very interesting poem of love. i were heared this poem from your voice. i am your student of sirajganj gov.t college. (Report) Reply

    Sayeed Abubakar (6/15/2016 4:55:00 PM)

    Good. Your comment is nice

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  • (7/6/2014 10:19:00 AM)


    Powerful poem on love and it is beautiful (Report) Reply

    Sayeed Abubakar (7/8/2014 9:55:00 AM)

    Thanks, dear poet.

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  • Shish Mohammad (10/15/2013 2:08:00 AM)


    Ir's called spontaneous overflow of powerful feeling. (Report) Reply

    Sayeed Abubakar (6/15/2016 4:57:00 PM)

    Yes, It is that

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  • Allen Steble (5/15/2013 10:57:00 PM)


    Powerful and meaningful words captured nicely in 4 verses, nice poem. (Report) Reply

    Sayeed Abubakar (6/15/2016 4:58:00 PM)

    Excellent. A nice comment

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  • Hazel Durham (4/28/2013 11:39:00 AM)


    The passion that is love embracing nature with the truth that shines from your eyes!
    Beautiful write!     (Report) Reply

    Sayeed Abubakar (6/15/2016 4:59:00 PM)

    Many many thanks, dear Hazel for your nice comment

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  • (1/27/2013 8:38:00 PM)


    I can rhyme it the whole day. Excellent. a 10. (Report) Reply

    Sayeed Abubakar (6/15/2016 4:59:00 PM)

    Oh really? You are so great!

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  • Musfiq Us Shaleheen (11/8/2012 11:59:00 AM)


    Simple and awesome with beautiful relation. (Report) Reply

    Sayeed Abubakar (6/15/2016 5:00:00 PM)

    Thank you very much. I feel inspired

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  • Zakaria Hossain (5/9/2012 12:27:00 AM)


    It is a nice piece of poem. I listen to this poem today. This poet is also one of my favorite poet and favorite teacher. So I like him most. (Report) Reply

    Sayeed Abubakar (6/15/2016 5:33:00 PM)

    ha ha. Thanks. It's just nice

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  • Malini Kadir (5/2/2012 1:54:00 AM)


    you and Me; me and you
    how sweetly put and shortly said.....
    regards
    Malinikadir     (Report) Reply

    Sayeed Abubakar (6/15/2016 4:51:00 PM)

    Nice comment. Short but beautiful

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Poem Submitted: Monday, June 20, 2011

Poem Edited: Monday, July 16, 2012
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