A Lovers Moment Poem by Simon Collins

A Lovers Moment

Rating: 5.0


Standing too close to me
In this cool late summer evening
Clusters of tiny flies dance to a silent rhythm
like drunk atomic particles
Your smile lights a fire
Far away in the psychedelic twilight
A chimneys Unblown smoke curls and unwinds
into a soft translucent cushion
You better go, he is inside
I say in my head while noticing your eye colour
Wanting to look deeper
The sun is almost spent and the cooling earth relents
It's warmth
I wonder where he is you say
As the colours darken and pull away from the light
You are gone

Thursday, May 3, 2012
Topic(s) of this poem: colour
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Captain Cur 08 May 2012

You create the scene, the unsaid feelings that speak loudly throughout this poem. An enjoyable and reflective read.

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Kasia Fedyk 04 May 2012

I love this poem Simon, it's very deep, lyrics flow to the rhythm of your heart. Thank you.

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