Blue is taken by the expectant rain
And given clothes of silver
I await the cleansing
Knowing soon I will not miss her
I am cold
In solidarity with the wanting earth
Wanting this steel grey day,
Relief will soon be ours
But for now
We wait
Together
Very imaginative - you may like to read mine entitled After The Rain.
It is not like what i imagine when i first read the title, but it still beautiful it has a nice depth of meaning, beautiful shot screen (and i see you eat noodles...must be hungry waiting for the rain huh hahaha joking!) Keep writing_Unwritten Soul
beautiful imaginative lines...allegorical and well crafted. liked yer lines mate be happy :)
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Simon, very beautiful and touching, its pure soul expression.