A Married Life Poem by Moom Rahaman

A Married Life

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I would love to present you
A pair of bird in the cage,
Do you have any favorite?
Which bird you prefer more?
What birds represent your married life?
I would love to present you
A pair of bird in the cage.

Friday, December 15, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: bird,life,marriage
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Indira Renganathan 15 December 2017

Exciting allegory....it is the real life experience for both man and woman....good work10

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Chinedu Dike 15 December 2017

A well encapsulated piece of poetry nicely brought forth with insight. Thanks for sharing Moom.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 15 December 2017

A short poem yet very expensive Thanks for sharing...10

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Bernard F. Asuncion 15 December 2017

Moom, such a fine poem...10+++

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moom rahaman 15 December 2017

Thanks a lot Bernard

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Rajnish Manga 15 December 2017

Welcome to this august Forum, . Dear Moom. But, please do not be so unkind. To make someone happy, you cannot think of putting or keeping a pair of loving birds into a cage. Thank you so much.

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moom rahaman 15 December 2017

Thank you Rajnish.

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Jazib Kamalvi 15 December 2017

A sublime start with a nice poem, Moom R. You may like to read my poem, Love And Lust. Thank you.

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moom rahaman 15 December 2017

Thanks a a lot. I will explore your poems for sure.

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moom rahaman 15 December 2017

thanks Jazib

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