Polly Klomp

A Mind Unfold.

Numerous sparks are running through my head,
Asking me what to do,
A million thoughts are passing by,
And it’s all about you.

I think I wished for this,
And than it just happened.
I might have dreamed of this,
And I can’t quit.
I don’t know this feeling,
But I unconsciously love it.

My eyes are rolling as I begin to wonder.
Maybe it is meant to be?
Or am I going “down under”?
I think my mind is tricking me.

Do I want to believe it?
Or is it all a lie?
Do we want to do this?
Or am I just not _that_ guy?

As this can’t get any worse
I’m going in.
I stop my boundaries
I’ll take you for a spin.
And when I’m done,
Be sure to tell me how you feel
Because when I’m through with you
Your life will look surreal.

Poem Submitted: Tuesday, June 30, 2009
Poem Edited: Friday, May 27, 2011

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Comments about A Mind Unfold. by Polly Klomp

  • Ben Burgess (8/13/2009 6:37:00 AM)

    Loved this poem! ! well done!

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  • Danielle Guscott (7/24/2009 7:51:00 AM)

    'And when I’m done,
    Be sure to tell me how you feel
    Because when I’m through with you
    Your life will look surreal'

    Beautiful - wonderful - fantastic! I love this piece! Keep writing!

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