Mamta Agarwal

Rookie - 0 Points (March 27,1951 / India)

! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! A Moment In Time! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! - Poem by Mamta Agarwal

Summer at peak;
a young man
in a white singlet.

Summer at peak;
a young girl
in short sleeves.

Summer at peak;
A child licks
Ice cream.

Summer at peak;
an infant
On inhaler.

Summer at peak;
A young couple
Cosy in cinema hall seats.

Summer at peak;
A vendor
Sells lime water.

Summer at peak;
Gulmohar petals
lie limp on grass.

Summer at peak;
Dust haze,
Road rage.

Summer at peak;
beads of sweat
slide on lips.

Summer at peak,
Street wars,
Blame it on heat.

Comments about ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! A Moment In Time! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! by Mamta Agarwal

  • Sarwar Chowdhury (6/18/2009 4:42:00 AM)

    truely poetic word-picure!
    insightul beauty here!
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  • (6/12/2009 2:27:00 AM)

    The poem reflects a slice of realism, - indeed the summer in Delhi is at its
    peak! And the forecast is that every year this heat will gradually rise due to
    global warming! Alarming! 10!
    -Raj Nandy
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  • (6/11/2009 6:55:00 AM)

    The imagery of summer.I can feel the warmth. But where
    do all those moments go? The leaves will be falling
    before you know it. Very nostalgic, Mamta.

    As always,

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  • Vidi Writes (6/8/2009 9:34:00 AM)

    Summer at peak
    But you come up with this juicy greet
    Each word i pick
    With great devotion to marinate.

    Wow... i feel... let this poem don't end
    Let many more lines come in blend
    A joy ride with great append.

    Thank you dear poet for this wonderful write.
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  • (6/8/2009 5:29:00 AM)

    trueli at it's peak...... (Report) Reply

  • (6/6/2009 10:24:00 PM)

    Please write one on: 'Monsoon at peak'....Quick, quick! ! You know why Mamta...The heat is getting on...
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  • Saadat Tahir (6/6/2009 3:31:00 PM)

    hi mamta...u r very kind and partial to the sizzling summers
    nice poetic conect

    very nice lines
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  • Sandra Martyres (6/6/2009 1:49:00 PM)

    Lovely poetic observations on the expression of Summer for everyone...good write summer... (Report) Reply

  • (6/6/2009 1:27:00 PM)

    ''Summer at peak;
    an infant
    On inhaler''
    just a moment in time 10++
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  • (6/6/2009 1:21:00 PM)

    Each moment is different for each of us, then it changes. Nice observing Mamta. (Report) Reply

  • Ashraful Musaddeq (6/6/2009 1:07:00 PM)

    A great poem with summer.
    You have observed from different corner.
    Sweet and cute poem with a lovely form.10+++
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Poem Submitted: Saturday, June 6, 2009

Poem Edited: Saturday, June 6, 2009

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