A Moment's Wait And… Poem by Aniruddha Pathak

A Moment's Wait And…

Rating: 5.0


Failed for long to hold
And the life fell down.
A frown on face showed,
Pride had lost the crown.
And it felt as if
It'd fall from a cliff,
But safe, back to town
It'd just lost her frown.
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Reflections |02.07.2020|
Topic: life, death, suicide

Thursday, July 23, 2020
Topic(s) of this poem: death,life,suicide
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
We often overreact to some happenings in life. But life is never so fragile. Yet alas people are and they commit suicide.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kostas Lagos 24 July 2020

A sad poem.But a well written one!

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Juliet L Languedoc 24 July 2020

Thanks for the reminder of reality.

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Mahtab Bangalee 23 July 2020

OH! Reality of the concrete world defeats the life which wanna live in fantasy!

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Aniruddha Pathak

Aniruddha Pathak

Godhra - Gujarat
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