Inspired by Suki Mitchell
I want
for the thought
of a moment
with me in you
in a time long,
long ago where in skies
above earths highest peaks
we embraced and flew
as our angels each held above us
the stars of life through love.
There you hear and see me
as I hear and see you,
in face and words
in dress and in time,
all as is of us
is brought forth
in our minds by rhyme and not
reason; and you I tamed
that very first time.
Now feed to me
in my hunger
the ample sweetness
that flows so hot and wet
from your giving soul
and wrap around me your
glowing smile and allow me
to ease the pain of your capture
by this boring lifetime so.
For it is here
in this moment
within your life and mine
that again we meet and you thrust
deeply upon me holding my awe within
the soft petals of your whole
being bringing back to us
the memories of our first
thirsts quenched.
From now until forevermore
feel each moment as I,
with me held deeply within
your essence and you fly
through open star filled skies
and entwine our souls
in an eternal embrace,
one with which to last
the awe of time.
Those passionate moments very well expressed with touching words in poetic form...............amazing work....... I request you to read my poemThe moment written a year ago and leave a comment on it....thanks for sharing this
Aloha Deepak... Thank you my brother for your visit, read, and these concise and uplifting comments... Passionate moments... these are the rarity... happening only when two souls are so intertwined that they return to heaven's fold in that instant of selfless love gifted to the innocent as is the perfect act of passion... only those of an empty mind and with innocence of soul may experience these events... Give this song a listen... The Power of Love, by Frankie Goes to Hollywood... circa mid-eighties... and imagine this intertwining with the soul you know you love... All of the best from this life, to you, and all of your relations... Michaelw1two.
and wrap around me your glowing smile and allow me to ease the pain of your capture.... yearning for the eternal embrace.... very very nice poem. the use of words and the imagination are wonderful. thank you dear poet. tony
Aloha Edward... Good New Year Sir... and thank you for looking in on this post, and for your soulful comments... Sometimes a word or two of encouraging thoughts lead to such results... These few offerings of that most eternal of hopes, true spiritual love, make for a better read and quite simply an easier pull of breath for even the most hard hearted of individuals... Here is to the satisfying thought that your hunger may be sated... all of the best from this life, to you, and all of your relations... Michaelw1two
In my hunger; but with the works of hope. Thanks for sharing.
A heightened moment of one's entity merging with another in love which is going to have its impact lasting till eternity! An etherial experience is created and is conveyed through striking images! Enjoyed much!
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
A very alluring and captivating write. Love radiates and blossoms in this romantic write. the object of affection must be floating on air! . Very nice.