A Musing Poem by Adryan Barnathan

A Musing

Rating: 3.7

Thoughts come
without warning
through rich scented earth
and wet grass
inhaled, slowly
way down to my feet
and out through
my deeply embedded toes
that throw off
shimmers of dew
that glisten on trees
and alight the horizon

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Lenchen Elf 22 February 2005

Lovely thoughts Adrienne: -)

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Rene Bennett 21 July 2005

This too is just breathtaking! I love your style. You write with such elogance that leaves this reader feeling warm inside! Rene'

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Angela Barker 13 September 2007

Vivid, moving, calming, perfect.

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Cirrus Spray 15 July 2006

A setting to be inspired to write, to smell out memories, that moments ago seemed so distant, and feel my way through to the future..I've felt this way before, but you've put it down so beautifully in words!

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Sid John Gardner. 16 May 2006

Just close your eyes on a sunlit warm summers morning standing in a freshly mown hayfield and commune with nature.Thats how I feel about this poem.A wonderful presentation filled with the smells, feel, and spiritual essence of nature. Thanks Adrienne - Sid John.

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Nick Percowycz 01 April 2006

Are you kidding me? This is beautiful, just beautiful! I love it! God bless!

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Courtney Elmlinger 12 February 2006

I am in awe of your imagery! This poem has a magical quality to it somehow. Extremely breathtaking!

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