A New Emptiness Poem by John Scully

Why so much of negative energy in this poem? A new emptiness, unlit corridors, and saw the tomorrow's catastrophes...so sad. A few people are in this mode always, but I do not want them to suffer. Come out of your dream world and see the real world, it is so beautiful, well lit, there are a lots of people to help us and no problems..

So much said in so few words flowing in time.

Really love it, a fantastic poem.

Profound philosophy with brevity of expression.Loved it.10+++

I like your use of the term, Unlit corridors. Though the poem is somewhat pessimistic, I like it because of its simplicity.

............still let's hold out hope the catastrophies never happen....congratulations on poem of the day....

Amazing talent you display by this poem. I admire this sweet write.

Really intense.Laudable effort. Keep it up :)

congratulations on being selected here...very compact and complete! ! !

strong write! Like it