Gold Star - 7,882 Points (2/2/1981 / kottayam)

A New Step - Poem by SALINI NAIR

It’s so hard to go to unknown
But need necessitate the to go that way
Fun never expected first
But a hall of solitude
A way that perch in silent mood
Someone asked to move that way
It started, and frail all the way
Need to move as it is the way
Unknown things are just for today
It will be the next, and melody of tomorrow

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Topic(s) of this poem: life

Comments about A New Step by SALINI NAIR

  • Akhtar Jawad (12/18/2014 1:01:00 AM)

    At the initial stage any thing new makes us doubtful and sometimes fearful but when we are used to it its beauty is gradually exposed to us. A nice write. (Report) Reply

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  • (8/24/2014 1:07:00 PM)

    Strange they may look for today
    But melody of tomorrow.........So well crafted.......I loved it
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  • (4/13/2014 8:43:00 AM)

    change to unknown always produce some friction.............. (Report) Reply

  • Geetha Jayakumar (2/12/2014 12:25:00 PM)

    A new step is a hall of solitude...Unknown is the path and unknown are the things...It's like an adventure. what comes next not sure of it.
    You ended beautifully with positivity...

    Unknown things are just for today
    It will be the next, and melody of tomorrow.....Loved reading it.
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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, February 11, 2014

Poem Edited: Wednesday, April 23, 2014

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