Last night she walked into my world,
her touch so soft, so sure,
last night she reached across the mile,
and whispered such sweet a word,
Last night she braved the unknown,
and danced with me a stranger,
Last night she took my hand,
showing me no danger.
Last night she touched me deep,
my spirit has been set free,
last night she was miles away,
yet I felt her here with me.
Hauntingly beautiful...a poem full of Love which makes the world go around.Another emotion packed read which puts a glow in the heart and lets you know Love or something like it can still reach across the miles....it has no specific time nor place. Excellent work Geoff 10/10 =Shelley=
A confident, flowing, enchanting piece. t x
Wonderful poetry about love, I like the rythm and it is so peaceful as if you whispered those words, beautiful Geoff. xx
This is very nicely writte...the feeling comes across so well... Thanks for sharing this poem...
absolutely beautiful. I loved it! ! ! .....wonderfully written! ! !
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
This is emotionally grand, just divine.....How wonderful for both....Gives one hope that perhaps there can be A Night that will last Forever, as you say, even if miles and miles are between the two...Sounds good to me......marci. :)