Aminat Opatola

Veteran Poet - 1,290 Points (1 july 1992 / Lagos)

A Note Of Feelings - Poem by Aminat Opatola

You held my thoughts like the bursts of musics in bent of floods,

watching you through my heart with glance of budding love,
up to those part you walked with perfect form,
I imagine all things in fairy tales,
holding up every flitted moments in gorgeous delights,
i felt your love cling to my heart like stars in mists of clouds,
my heart yearning in glorious urn,
i paced through empty walls and rooms,

fading around my shadows like dews on the leaves of morn,

see what you've done to my world?
Through rain and dark i see your face,
clearing my head i see right through,
only this wide beautiful smile glaring at me,

could a love be any stronger,
I burn with a love i couldn't repel,
loneliness nudges my form with battles of memories,
your visions brightens more and more floating through me like waters in a warm dream,

oh how much i miss you smell of rosy scent,
so great, so pure a spell you've casted,
where your cool radiances fell,

flashing upon my head to crush,
imprisoning my soul with lost,
moaning through as i shiver in your love spell,
Do not drink those tears that forms,
if its warm let it slips,
i know you feel all but the same,
juxt be sure to sleep through this blinding reign,
with the stars and moon guilding through,
you may be so far away from me,
but don't be all too suprised with how and when,
if you wake and see me hold you in my arms.

Topic(s) of this poem: love


Comments about A Note Of Feelings by Aminat Opatola

  • Drtony Brahmin (10/19/2018 3:28:00 PM)

    i felt your love cling to my heart like stars in mists of clouds,
    my heart yearning in glorious urn, .. beautiful expressions dear poetess. thank u. tony
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Poem Submitted: Saturday, July 21, 2018



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