Aminat Opatola

Veteran Poet - 1,290 Points (1 july 1992 / Lagos)

About Me. - Poem by Aminat Opatola

My nature as delicate like white faded violet,
my voice as tiny like little stars in space,
my cheek
soft upon my jaws like a thorn on a thousand roses. Yes!
My eyes so sexy as a night with a thousand stars,
my nose as pointed like a shining tinted nails,
my teeth as sparkling white upon my rounded shining face,
my lips cupped and tempting as it speaks with passion.
My neck rounded as it fits to the cupness of my head, yes!
my breast stays clamped to my chest like two rounded dumplings,
my hips wide below my waist as it stays shapy as it can be. YES
my creation says perfection,
cause i symbolizes
passion and roses.
Am a woman, am beautiful.

Topic(s) of this poem: woman

Form: Anaphora

Comments about About Me. by Aminat Opatola

  • Anu Soneye (5/4/2018 7:40:00 PM)

    Kudos A literary painting of yourself to portray the beauty uniqueness of the feminine gender. (Report)Reply

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  • Chinedu Dike (5/2/2018 10:13:00 AM)

    An impressive write that depicts power of positive thinking, penned with clarity of thought and mind. I like the visionary impact of flow of your words. Thanks for sharing Aminat. (Report)Reply

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  • Aminat Opatola (4/14/2018 4:47:00 AM)

    Ok dear jazib, , i will do so..thanks for d comment (Report)Reply

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  • Jazib Kamalvi (4/13/2018 10:56:00 PM)

    A refined poetic imagination, Aminat. You may like to read my poem, Love And Iust. Thank you. (Report)Reply

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  • (4/13/2018 1:51:00 PM)

    Thanks for d comment dearie (Report)Reply

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  • Kostas Lagos (4/13/2018 6:44:00 AM)

    This poem is delightful! Well done! (Report)Reply

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Poem Submitted: Friday, April 13, 2018

Poem Edited: Wednesday, May 2, 2018

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