A Pair Of Eyes Poem by Neela Nath Das

A Pair Of Eyes

Rating: 3.7


A pair of eyes constitutes the mass of art,
A pair of eyes, tells the throb of heart.
A pair of eyes, is a cool forest pond.
A pair of eyes, is sorcerer's wand.
A pair of eyes, mirrors the soul and mind.
A pair of eyes, thru which man we find.
A pair of eyes, sees all our deeds,
God's eyes are those, one's conscience needs.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Aftab Alam Khursheed 22 August 2013

truly said brother eyes can disclose the hidden God's eyes....one must think very nice

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Gajanan Mishra 22 August 2013

good write, thanks, I like it. Please read my new poems and say something.

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Patricia Grantham 01 September 2013

A pair of eyes is a powerful statement. A pair of eyes is the windows to the soul. The eyes tells a lot about the person. When they are sad, happy, love, hate, compassion. Only God though sees all. Very inspiring.

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Shahzia Batool 30 August 2013

a hitting write, Hari, the idea is beautiful, deep and mystic...after many days i read something from your wonderful writing...thanks for this piece, it's lovely...if i were the composer, i would try to avoid the repetition of A pair of eyes from line 2 to 6...but the emphasis is strong in yours, indeed!

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Heather Wilkins 28 August 2013

nice write Hari the eyes of GOD sees all

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Subbaraman N V 24 August 2013

Most important blessing of God are ones eyes and the right sight!

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David Wood 23 August 2013

A delightful write Hari, the eyes tell a lot about a person, more than words.

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