A Path To Risky Love Poem by Alyssa Lippi

A Path To Risky Love



Her lungs ache
from being so close
to her flaming heart
her breath comes
in short gasps
she's scared, , so scared, ,
Nothing else has ever felt so right
but is she willing
to let go of everything
for this hand she barely knows
to release:
any feelings
she's ever felt
for anyone else
to risk dropping
her now so predictable, , stable life
for the unknown...
anything could happen
perfection
or
destruction
So she chooses

And prays.....

Don't let this hurt.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Lanesa Mantia 04 May 2010

This is really good. I like it alot....and it seems like every girl who reads this can relate..........wonderfully done!

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Adrian Cordova 17 April 2010

This is wonderfuly written

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Afzal Shauq 15 April 2010

lovely is this poem..enjoyed..lovely

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Joshua Daukei 09 April 2010

this is very well writen

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Christopher Tiganescu 09 April 2010

this is very well done

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