Not Long Left

Rookie (17.05.1981 / The Molten Core)

A Pointless Poem For You Are Gone. - Poem by Not Long Left

the cracks in your desert weathered face,
home to a thousand thoughts and memories,
from a time and a place,
long lost to the generals of time.

weak, whispered words,
whistle through your well used teeth,
and underneath the purple war paint,
a face of a modern mortal saint.

with thin grey cotton hair,
and a peramant dent in your
beloved arm chair,
a seasoned soul
do not rest those tired eyes just
yet my grand old love.
for the world still needs,
your smile.


Comments about A Pointless Poem For You Are Gone. by Not Long Left

  • john tiong chunghoo (1/1/2006 1:46:00 AM)


    good poem vincent! ! ! ! (Report) Reply

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  • (12/2/2005 10:53:00 AM)


    We should value everyone but how much more an older person who has been there for us. (Report) Reply

  • (12/2/2005 9:13:00 AM)


    Vincent, , , this is a reall cool poem man. Keep writing.

    Peace.
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Poem Submitted: Friday, December 2, 2005



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