A Pointless Poem For You Are Gone. Poem by Not Long Left

A Pointless Poem For You Are Gone.

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the cracks in your desert weathered face,
home to a thousand thoughts and memories,
from a time and a place,
long lost to the generals of time.

weak, whispered words,
whistle through your well used teeth,
and underneath the purple war paint,
a face of a modern mortal saint.

with thin grey cotton hair,
and a peramant dent in your
beloved arm chair,
a seasoned soul
do not rest those tired eyes just
yet my grand old love.
for the world still needs,
your smile.

Friday, December 2, 2005
Topic(s) of this poem: purple
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
John Tiong Chunghoo 01 January 2006

good poem vincent! ! ! !

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Uriah Hamilton 02 December 2005

We should value everyone but how much more an older person who has been there for us.

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A. B. 02 December 2005

Vincent, , , this is a reall cool poem man. Keep writing. Peace.

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