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A Promise Kept** - Poem by POOJA LADYLUCK

For the sake of a promise kept
I'm still searchin ur way
I hope u'll clear ur debt
Of my love some day

I'd given u ur share
But y did u have to depart?
Into the void I stare
with a promise kept but a broken heart

People shout out saying
Till eternity, will i wait?
Completely ignorant 'bout paying
The debts of love and hate

U said u'll always be there for me
When stealthily ur death crept
We were betrayed by destiny
leaving behind, our broken dreams but
a promise kept...............

Comments about A Promise Kept** by POOJA LADYLUCK

  • (11/17/2008 4:38:00 AM)

    good poem...talking frank...good rhyming there, Pooja...impressive piece 10 (Report) Reply

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  • (10/14/2008 2:33:00 AM)

    Very well expressed, friend. I really loved it. Thank you very much. (Report) Reply

  • (4/29/2008 12:36:00 AM)

    The words used by you in the poem make the expression so better and meaningful.Really you need to keep your hope up all time. Vey Good work. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, April 2, 2008

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