A Reply(7) Poem by Akhtar Jawad

A Reply(7)

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Keeping devil busy was surely her right,
Every night is not a honeymoon night,
Let him take some rest,
He'll be at his best,
She shouldn't have hit with fracturing might.

Monday, November 28, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: laziness
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Abhilasha Bhatt 28 November 2016

Both are superb.....liked it :)

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Valsa George 01 December 2016

Ha.... ha! ! Through your limericks, mine too are getting some attention! Thank you so much Akhtar ji!

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Kumarmani Mahakul 28 November 2016

Your reply on Limerick to Valsa's Inaction is fantastic. Both poems are much interesting. Read and enjoyed. Many thanks Akhtarji for sharing this....10

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Rajnish Manga 28 November 2016

Both the poems are equally entertaining. Both of them are capable of projecting the respective scenes before the reader. Thanks, Akhtar Jawad Sahab.

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Mithilesh Yadav 28 November 2016

Mujhey chalney dey aye malik mere yehi aantim cha hai...... Aabhi to ehsas hua hai ki chal raha hun jispey wo Teri rah hai..... Khoobh babajaan.....

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M Asim Nehal 28 November 2016

Excellent one, both are equally humorous......10

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