Keeping devil busy was surely her right,
Every night is not a honeymoon night,
Let him take some rest,
He'll be at his best,
She shouldn't have hit with fracturing might.
Ha.... ha! ! Through your limericks, mine too are getting some attention! Thank you so much Akhtar ji!
Your reply on Limerick to Valsa's Inaction is fantastic. Both poems are much interesting. Read and enjoyed. Many thanks Akhtarji for sharing this....10
Both the poems are equally entertaining. Both of them are capable of projecting the respective scenes before the reader. Thanks, Akhtar Jawad Sahab.
Mujhey chalney dey aye malik mere yehi aantim cha hai...... Aabhi to ehsas hua hai ki chal raha hun jispey wo Teri rah hai..... Khoobh babajaan.....
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Both are superb.....liked it :)