A Robust Down Pour! Poem by malini kadir

malini kadir

Nagapatinam, a coastal port, Tamilnadu, India NOW RESIDING IN TRICHY

A Robust Down Pour!

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A robust down pour

The passing cloud
Fluffed up darkening
Seemingly scowling!
On point of loud bellow!

Showers start off
The earthy smell of,
Fragrance of first showers
On long barren grounds
Assail the nostrils…..

Young grass flatten
In compliance
The grass hopper on duty
Streaks off to safety!
All bugs washed off!

As torrents of rain
Ceaseless thrashes on….
Time stagnate
His anger in full vent!

Today was just
Not my day!
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~malinikadir

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dr.Wardha Jawdat 23 February 2009

lol.....reading the poem one feels washed away in the torrent of your verse...and then suddenly comes the.....last two lines...lol...really cute....

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Dr.Wardha Jawdat 23 February 2009

lol.....reading the poem one feels washed away in the torrent of your verse...and then suddenly comes the.....last two lines...lol...really cute....

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Dr.Wardha Jawdat 23 February 2009

lol.....reading the poem one feels washed away in the torrent of your verse...and then suddenly comes the.....last two lines...lol...really cute....

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