At her prime
the busty Goody
bid bye
to life around
the urge to live
is burning hot
yet the flames
blown out
canker in the bud
cancer to dread
God loves those
Who die young, though.
God loves those/ who die young....; very impressive and expressive lines!
nicely penned..nice to read...too young to die means less guilts and sins..naizz
God loves those Who die young, though. sometimes dying is better than walking dead.... not a word to express the feel brought by your poem! ! ! ! ! marvelous....... mind blowing....... words of heaven!
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
the urge to live is burning hot yet the flames blown out sadness pictured well for a death immature.... all ur poems are lovely laltha.