A Beggar Maid Poem by lalitha iyer

A Beggar Maid

Rating: 4.9


beg me for life
to the unseen one
beg me for living spirit
to the invisible sight

he gave me coins
in golden lustre
he gave me children
with giggle and twitter

he gave me a mum
who filled life with sun
he gave me a pa
who transformed truths into ribbons

he gave me voice
to cheer up my glooms
he gave me ears
to listen to lovely tunes

he gave me beauty
to admire others
he gave me health
to enjoy full wealth

yet when my mum died
I was left all alone;
when my loved ones cried
I donno how to cheer them with pride

when I looked into the things
that he gave with abundant wings
i learnt that he reserved the inthings
the bubbling spirit, the dominant zing.............

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Preetam Shetty 13 May 2010

This is beautiful........Hard reality of life....every thing that is given shall be taken back one day

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Eyan Desir 17 May 2010

Poetic and well express my friend

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Pradyumna Jyotir 27 May 2010

This is so beautiful....and the philosophy is amazing! ! ! !

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Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK 18 July 2010

‘beg me for life to the unseen one beg me for living spirit to the invisible sight’ ~ The Great Indian Poet R.N.Tagore [Noble Laureate] wrote, ‘Give light to blind/ Give life to dead’ …excellent diction…. congrats for sharing Sir Ms. Nivedita UK 10/10

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warner treuter 23 August 2010

Lots of gifts. Wonderful. I think care is the most wonderful of gifts. Like knowing the other side of love.

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James Mclain 01 November 2016

And the wind will blow through our bones touch the sky and move the sand to cover what once were our eye's.. and still we rise.. iip

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Uma Ram 11 May 2015

Poem with insighful thoughts...thanks for sharing

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Very insightful and thanksgiving poem and sad expressions.

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Yash Shinde 26 October 2012

very insightful poem lovely liked :)

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Anil Kumar Panda 03 May 2012

very nice.feel the pinch in the lines.liked it.

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