A Sad Life Poem by sylvia spencer

A Sad Life

Rating: 5.0


What a sad life I lead, stuck here on the wall
with two screws in my guts so that I don't fall.
I am only here to hang a basket, one that is full
of flowers; then to be sprayed with water every
twenty four hours. All I am is a piece of metal
holding a flower basket folly. It has made me
lose my dignity and I feel such a wally.
I was once a proud hanger but all I am now
is a rusty old clanger.My paint is almost gone
and I do feel the strain when on comes the water
or down comes the rain. It's worse in the summer
when the water comes twice a day the weight is
horrendous but who am I to say.
No one cares if I am left out in the cold, I am a wall
bracket who is now growing old.
I am doomed for the scrap yard, that's where all dead
metal goes. They better do it soon because this basket
will hit someone on the nose.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Suchoon Mo 01 July 2006

The last two lines. They can surely kick. A good poem. Best Regard S.

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Nalini Hebbar 14 July 2006

you do find a poem in the strangest of places...you found one on a peg! ! ! ! ...lovely...but YOU should go on and on even if you hit some people on the nose every now and then...well hit me with a poem anyday! ! ...love...nalini

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Ernestine Northover 01 July 2006

This is sad and hilarious at the same time. Wonderful description of a wall backet, giving it a life is great. A thoroughly delightful read, and a brilliant write. Love and hugs Ernestine XXX

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Duncan Wyllie 01 July 2006

I agree with Sandra, to personalize somthing in this way and then to add feeling that the reader can interpret, wow! what a gift Love Duncan X

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Sandra Fowler 01 July 2006

Dear Sylvia, you have such a unique way of bringing inanimate things to life. Praise for your rich imagination., Love, Sandra

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Francesca Johnson 01 July 2006

Another little masterpiece, Sylvia. I do so appreciate your poems, they are refreshingly different and really funny. Two screws in his guts - how painful, and ready for the scrappy, too. You've got me feeling sorry for the poor thing, ha ha ha. Keep them coming.... Love, Fran xx

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