A Seperate Path Taken Poem by Stephanie Saba

A Seperate Path Taken

Rating: 5.0


She moans
I groan
both aggravated 'or the same ordeal
neither no where to go
and nonetheless where to begin
but when we do figure our dilema
we'll no were on the right road
though on seperate paths
our descisions will be made
distance will play no role in turning our friendship to fade
for we are close
and nothing dare come in the way of that
though we both no it couldn't
and that is a fact!

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Vinod Kumar 11 January 2009

Right and fit parrallel track, very nice, the train can move swiftly without an accident, thank you for sharing the message oriented poem,10++, and keep writing if time allows.

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Ashley Horstman 04 October 2008

That poem was very nicely written

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Very nicely written. I loved it! Peace out, Lexi Baby

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Ben Bergeth 15 September 2008

very cool...i like this a lot

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