A Simple Wish Comments

Easy to read and visualise as you have written it well.

i wish i had a house and a son the only angel who could call me mom nice expression you used good one

what a wish.....and what a poem

A beautiful poem, lovely piece. Love it,10+

a touching poem, thanks for sharing

wonderful poem of wishes, Your heart will mend and wishes come true. Good write

very beautuful poem, , , sweet simple...i especially love the start and mid.very touching