A Song Poem by Mihaela Pirjol

A Song

Rating: 5.0


When with love, and fire in your eyes,
You catch me in a deep surprise,
I turn from you, to hide my love:
Meek and weak just like a dove.

I pray, you do not hear my heart,
Which with a single glance it starts
Trembling: frightened like a sparrow,
At the thought of no tomorrow...

When the sun is shining bright,
And you're nowhere near my side,
To embrace me in your arms;
Drunk into each other's charms:

I write a verse and think of you:
A red heart that's dipped in blue;
And read the bruises through my lines,
Till I forget that love is blind.

Thursday, May 25, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: love,poem,song,writing
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Valsa George 27 February 2019

A very passionate song of love! This can be seen as a message of love written at a moment when one is missing that one person deeply loved and is sent to him at a moment of intense longing! The reader can easily hear the heartbeats of one pining for love and it is beautifully and poignantly expressed here!

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Kumarmani Mahakul 29 October 2017

This is beautifully crafted poem on love. Each and every line is touching and amusing. I quote... When with love, and fire in your eyes, You catch me in a deep surprise, I turn from you, to hide my love: Meek and weak just like a dove. ********************************* I write a verse and think of you: A red heart that's dipped in blue; And read the bruises through my lines, Till I forget that love is blind. Well done. Thanks for sharing.

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Richard Beevor 11 June 2017

Absolutely beautiful poetry, I love this!

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