A Request Of Love (Sonnet) Poem by Mihaela Pirjol
A Request Of Love (Sonnet)
Essential is to humans Love to feel:
Rarity—luxury appears to be;
But in my heart, the weight of its content,
In silent hope awaits itself to share.
And if you are there, in a need to find
The arbour's root of life which grows in light,
Then, here I am, in present time at heart:
So overwhelmed with all the love I've got!
I, to the Universe my request sent,
In hope that you one day my heart attend:
I will meet you at the margin of Space:
My loving heart at core—your dwelling-place;
And soul in soul we will be unified,
Towards new Horizons to be defined!
Love to feel! In silent hope awaits to share. Nice piece of work.
A beautiful love poem, well articulated, nicely encapsulated and subtly penned. The divine ordained function of the heart is to love. A nice piece indeed. Thanks for sharing. Please read my poem THE PHOENIX STRANGLER.
The first two lines create a trension: Love is called essential but in the very next line it's called a rarity. But the point is love is a part of our human identity; the term rarity refers to the world in which we may or may not find satisfaction. The language of the poem is so vivid I was almost lulled into thinking it's all satisfaction. Not quite. THE ROOT OF LIFE WHICH GROWS IN LIGHT is a beautiful description of love with the organic image of the root emphasizes the continuous growth of love.. I WILL MEET YOU ON THE EDGE OF SPACE is wonderful hyperbole. It shows a commitment virtually unconditional; your readiness asserted with no doubts darkening the moment. MY HEART AT CORE, YOUR DWELLING PLACE - What a gift of self that affirms, what trust is behind this declaration. The closing two lines are a forecast of the possibilities of such commitment. This is truly a VISION OF LOVE.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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I will meet you on the edge of Space: My heart at core—your dwelling-place; And soul in soul we'll unify, To new Horizons to define! ......nice poetic expression. A beautiful poem on love nicely executed.10