A Song Of Despair Poem by VIPINS PUTHOORAN
A Song Of Despair
The night rain sing the song
To benumb my soul all along.
Grief breaks heart's fence
Over the hills of silence
The song of despair!
Floats everywhere in air
The song of despair
Floats everywhere;
Till the depth of heart's creek
To cascade tears through the cheek.
One's heart becomes stone-dead
When their most loved left its stead.
Eyes then lost fore'er its shine,
Nothing will follow there but a shadow;
The only crony I've to say as mine
To walk with me in this despair-meadow.
Once in a medow of love I walked
With my lover and we stalked
Holding her hand in my wrist,
Holding my hand around her waist.
We woven the wings of dreams
And built castles on streams
Life was an ever opened book
Where the moments of love we took,
To draw the most beautiful pictures on its pages
As our hearts were one as a land with no rages
Everytime the hands of destiny write its word
The golden pages of life was engulfed by rust
That made the glitter of love blurred,
Eyes scatter the seeds of despair in dust
No one knows what's destiny,
Until they feel what's despair!
A sad poem but nevertheless showed your genious, Vipins. Love this compo and as always the words pierced the heart and wow! What a blow! In France we say, Bravo! If you are a cook, you are a great cordon bleue. I would like to be invited in your feasts everyday. The taste of your poem is irrisistible to the palate. Keep-up and discover more recipes of words...Virginia
Holy man! Holy spirit! See this romantic lyric. Oh, My god! This poem is my bundle of joy and cup of tea, I don't why! Yes my fellow poet you rocked my heart with this love poem. I love to sing........................ 'Till to the depth of my heart's creek To cascade tears through my cheek. But this moon heart is stone-dead For she left from my heart's stead.' The lugubriousness spread everywhere in the poem, Showing the feelings of losing a lover. The poem is genuine and origin in its idea. Definitely pick of all your poems. Loud Cheers, Can your hear!
Brillant use of how you use your words...poetic and words flows into each sentence like a ripple affect...love this poem...sad, but love it.
The elegy of a love lorn soul! ! Intense emotions powerfully conveyed.....A very nice poem! !
THIS IS A MARVELLOUS PIECE OF ART …………………………………….. What a nice poem IT IS! Nice words have been used in the poem. The quality of the poem is in its flow, the texture of the poem is knitted well, the theme is fantastic, a very good image has been created.The another quality of the poem is its mystic music. It is a great poem.I like the poem; I enjoyed it while reading. I am giving you 100/100..Keep it up. And at last I like to thank you for sharing this superb poem among us. please read some of mine.ESPECIALLY ‘’I WANT TO DIE’’
Revenge is a kind of wild justice.-Bacon. When you suffer within yourself, you differ from others and pour forth lines of melancholy verse. Cheers!
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12/5/2025 2:55:49 AM # 1.0.0
A great write with a good story line and flow good job Vipins