A Special Someone! Poem by Puppy Luver (10 years old)

A Special Someone!

Rating: 5.0


I was hoping for someone
to come down the street
maybe someone special
perhaps even sweet

I don’t really know her
but I know she’s around
I will check all over
from the sky to the ground

when finally I found her
to my great surprise
she was my half-sister
happy tears in her eyes.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Amanda Lukas 05 April 2007

It's great to see a young poet with such talent! You make your reader giggle! Keep it up.

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your so young you have so much to say i really like this poem today

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Heartfelt joyful writing with a well-penned twist; you make your reader happy! Keep writing Pups! t x

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Jalisa Berrain 28 March 2007

Awwwwww! You are just to cute and to my surprise an excellent writer.Awwwww! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

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Jennifer Her 26 March 2007

aww...how sweet...cute poem^^

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Puppy Luver (10 years old)

Puppy Luver (10 years old)

East Coast, USA
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