A Story Of Life Poem by Patricia Wiley

A Story Of Life

Rating: 5.0


The life that we live
is just one big story
it has many climaxs
and many reasons

The Life that we live
is just a story
a story that has been told
and come true
sometimes it gets turned around
and then other times
its just like a flow

The life that we live
we try to live it to the fullest
some succeed
and some dont.

The life that we live
is sometimes bad
and sometimes good
it can be normal
or it can be totally different

The life that we live
is just a story thats to be
retold over and over again
Live Your Life.....

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
sky dreams 16 April 2009

i love the meaning behind this poem.. if i could give some humble advice though, i would say to maybe try to make it more metaphorical by having the 'life' do the actions.. so like from 'a story that has been told' to a story that tells itself, or remains untold... or 'sometimes it gets turned around and then other times its just like a flow' to sometimes it turns itself around while other time it likes to just flow.... but that's just me and not everyone thinks the same, but i do love this poem great job!

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James Mclain 16 April 2009

A good story this story of life you tell to fold unfold and grows less strife..thank you..iip

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Ndeye Aissa thiam 29 July 2022

A good story I really appreciate your poems and it make me know more about life and I am in good love with your story

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Greenwolfe 1962 22 April 2009

What wisdom. I thought you were very young, but that piece of writing was filled with a wisdom born of age. You are either a genius or a very great soul that has a lot to give to the world. And the structure and presentation were just what they needed to be. All praise to you my dear. GW62

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Eyan Desir 21 April 2009

So true and so sweet

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Ultimate X 21 April 2009

i its good.....................

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Muhammad Ali 20 April 2009

Nice thoughts and good flow friend! Well done and keep it up 10/10 :)

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