A Striptease Poem by Akhtar Jawad

A Striptease

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The daughter of ocean is now in her teens,
On the top of a tree I see her preens,
Sweetheart, nature has taught you to fly,
Spread your wings, for the naughty sky,
Why don't you fly, I know you can fly?
High with the winds in the endless sky,
Take off sweetheart for the flight of love,
Don't know the way; you may follow a dove,
Learn the art of lightning from the sun and stars,
Touch hidden strings within you are guitars,
Thundering, showering fall on the towers,
Kiss the rainbow show of the nudist flowers,
Touch them and feel the aroma of God,
No more refrains, I now want a nod,
The roof of trees and the roots of plants,
Everyone is waiting for your showering grants,
Have sex with apex of the high mountains,
That is direly needed by the dry fountains,
Play this game with the green forest,
Come from the east, come from the west,
A hug will cool down the heated sky,
Now is the time, now you must fly,
Have a peg of wine, will you please,
The earth is ready for a Striptease.

Wednesday, May 27, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: rainy season
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Bri Edwards 16 August 2018

ok, good! you corrected stripetease to striptease! :)

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Hazel Durham 21 June 2015

So creative with your great imagination you take the reader on an amazing journey of sheer freedom of nature's dance! Original and great write!

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Valsa George 28 May 2015

Very very imaginative write.... the parched Earth is thirsting for the kiss of rain! Let the vapour from the ocean rise up sky high and, cool down and pour out in dancing movements, stripe teasing! Am I right in my interprtation?

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Akhtar Jawad 28 May 2015

You know and the readers know that Stripe Tease is dance in which the dancer removes the pieces of her dress one by one and throws it on the watchers. I have imagined the clouds throwing her beauty of rains one by one on the earth. Your interpretation is correct. Thanks for the comment. But you don't know and most of the readers don't know that here at Karachi the entire electrical installations are stale and as soon as it rains the supply of electricity is immediately stopped. So i have imagined the clouds as a dancer who when throws showers, immediately it is dark.

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