Lynn W. Petty

Gold Star - 5,245 Points (3/29/28 / Newport Beach, California)

A Strong Weaving - Poem by Lynn W. Petty

Some lives are made with burlap string,
Some lives are spun with silken thread,
But you wove mine a strong weaving,
From strands of pounded gold instead.

Topic(s) of this poem: life

Form: Quatrain

Comments about A Strong Weaving by Lynn W. Petty

  • Ernestine Northover (5/12/2016 1:35:00 PM)

    Lovely rhythm in this poem. It flows really well and the last line is just right for an ending. Delightful to read.
    Love Ernestine
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  • Bri Edwards (1/28/2016 4:06:00 PM)

    could i have a piece of YOUR life? i could use the cash.

    my life parts are from a junk yard.
    that's why some are particularly hard.
    but they're stuck together with spittle...
    from former quarterback Y. A. Tittle,
    so each day i additional yard.

    bri :)
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  • Kumarmani Mahakul (1/26/2016 6:40:00 PM)

    Strong waving defines life's destination and this poem is entirely nice and interesting. Wise sharing done.10 (Report) Reply

  • (1/14/2016 9:30:00 PM)

    Beautiful imagery, amazing analogy. Thank you for sharing. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Thursday, January 14, 2016

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