A Sunny Day In Falmouth Poem by Amy Gibbs

A Sunny Day In Falmouth

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The bright sky,
The birds gliding up so high,
That made us decide to go to the beach,
And I found a crab, and I think a leech,
I think its a leech because of its colour,
And it was long, like a dogs collar,
I went into the water, and ended us quivering,
And when I came back up to the rock, I was shivering,
The Rock Pools were cool, but I couldn't find a shrimp,
I hurt my toe, so I began to limp,
I kicked four sandcastles down,
And kicked down a weird-looking sand town,
I looked at the sky and saw it was nearlly night,
I looked at another side and saw that it was light,
We came home at about five 'o'clock,
The clock was going so fast,
We went home in the car,
I loved today, and the beach is not that far.....

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
T S 12 April 2009

I have never been to Falmouth but after reading this I want to... Lovely write 10 +++

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Fiona Davidson 12 April 2009

And Falmouth beaches are so beautiful aren't they Amy...spent some happy times at Gyllingvase (think I spelt it right) beach in the past...nice write...10++

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