A Childs Dream Poem by Amy Gibbs

A Childs Dream

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One night, a child fell asleep,
And she began to dream, so very deep,
As an angel crept into her mind,
But, oh, was she very blind,
The child ran to save this creature,
As her eyes were her only feature,
Her wings had snapped, and her dress was torn,
At that moment she wished she wasn't born,
As the child graciously hugged her close,
And carefully made her some tea and toast,
But as she made the toast, something hapened inside,
And when she woke up, the angel was by her side.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mel Vincent Basconcillo 12 April 2009

a child's dream is pure and innocent just like this poem brilliantly written

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Fiona Davidson 12 April 2009

Great write Amy...10+++

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James Mclain 11 April 2009

Upon this pillow yours in sleep the angel seeks your heart to ease.. thank you for this poem..iip

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Sue Sie 11 April 2009

Awww these are very tender thought out words... lovely and comforting...10..well done

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Mel Vincent Basconcillo 11 April 2009

i like this poem.. smooth and amazing.. nice to read

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