A Tale Of Two Smokers Comments

A wonderfully fun story with a very important message! Great job! I could smell the smoke from here! Sincerely, Mary

This is utterly superb... though I speak as an unrepentant smoker!

You write wonderful story poems. This one is especially timely. I hope that your wise advice is heeded. Love from your sister in spirit, Sandra

This is a good piece of advice to any smoker, inculding my-self, to stop smoking, Love Duncan

As always, your characters are right on the mark. I remember those days of stinking smoke, and I am glad that I was FINALLY able to kick the old ash can out the door. Scarlett

Wow. Certainly enough to put you off smoking! ! I gave up a while ago, it wasn't easy - having smoked since my teens - but reading something like this, makes you realise it was worth it! ! Thanks for the read! ! Joey