Wednesday, May 10, 2006

A Touch Of Love Comments

Rating: 5.0

There was once a child who's heart was broken, she had
no love only gifts and tokens. Showered with money and
gifts from her Dad, it's no wonder this poor child was always
sad. Her Mother never cared, there was no time for thought,
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Duncan Wyllie 15 May 2006

How can something be so beautiful yet so heart-breaking at the same time? You have the poet’s gift of personal style Love Duncan

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Your 'story'-mode pieces are increasingly captivating Sylvia. Loved this piece.

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Sandra Fowler 12 May 2006

Without love life would not be worth living. A very moving poem, Sylvia. Love from your sister in spirit, Sandra

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Mary Nagy 11 May 2006

A sad tale with a happy ending. I'm glad this woman finally did find love. Very nice. Sincerely, mary

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Ernestine Northover 10 May 2006

A very sad story to tell here Sylvia, and an unusual ending too. Good flow and balance though. Try changing, maize for maze. Love from your spellchecker. Love Ernestine XXX

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Scarlett Treat 10 May 2006

It seems to me that without love, our souls die, and some will find it where they can. How sad, sad, sad!

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