I searched for many treasures that reminded me of you
Your precious heart of gold and your radiant smile too
Saw the grace of your steps as you strolled into a room
Walking like you did when I was the bride and you the groom
Looked for you out the window when the rain started to fall
Listening so intently for it seemed that I heard you call
Stared at your footprints that you left behind in the snow
Watched you shake and shivered as cold winds began to blow
Gazed at the glint in your eyes as you peered up to the sun
Looked at hands so rugged having toiled until the day is done
A lovely treasure you are to me and yes a whole lot more
A precious jewel waiting ever at the threshold to the door
Copyright 2013
The longing for someone you care and love so much! Hope that the treasure, waiting at your threshold reach your presence at the earliest! Passionate expression of feelings, powerful and strong! Enjoyed! !
Memories so wonderfully stored in the treasure chest. You recalled them beautifully. Thank you.
Nicely written.. i read it many times.. its awesome.. longing me... thanks Patricia..
Like your 'precious jewel waiting ever at the threshold to the door', this poem itself will stand the test of time as a treasure for the readers. It is so wonderfully worded, coming straight from the heart, it's really amazing! It deserves 10/10. I enjoy reading your poems. May your pen or keyboard continue to produce such jewels as this for a long time to come!
This is a wonderfully written poem expressing true love so perfectly. Put together so finely, and straight from the heart. I enjoyed this poem so much!
awesome sharp shoot worth reading and enjoying thank you
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
fantastic poem, i enjoyed it, so nice a poem it is that i read it many times, thanks for sharing...